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    His hand so cold,
    His touch is freezing
    He didn´t became old
    Now he´s leaving.
    The last gleam of life
    Vanished from his eyes
    He may disguise
    but his heart turned to ice.
    The rain starts to pour
    On his bloodstrained face
    The taste of reversal, so sour
    And he will never leave this place.



~In memory of Zack Fair.
Rest In Peace.~
This is my quote for Zack Fair´s death. He was Cloud Strife´s best friend and died in a battle.
I don´t know alot about Final Fantasy Crisis Core, where Zack dies, I´ve only seen a few AMV´s on youtube and found one, that touched me and made me cry.

May he rest in peace
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allietyger Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
my heart is crying TT_TT love this
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amandart1 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww, so nice. :tears:
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perfectflyer Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
TT.TT sniff...
I loved that guy...
Still do...
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KittehLub Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
T-T Aww..
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katloverz11 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
i started to cry by reading this
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SubakunoGaara Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Interface Designer
I did while writing it.
Thank you :)
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Aqua1010 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You know it doesn't have to be sad. If you look at Norse mythology with the story of Beowolf he died a hero for what he has done like Zack he died and became a hero and like in Beowolf they had a statue of him put up, for Zack they left the buster sword in the spot he died to remember him. If you think about it that way it's still sad but gives you some reassurance.
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Edward-3-Elric Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why won't real guys act like Zack?
That is one of my biggest mysteries in life.
RIP Zack Fair. The greatest man who has ever lived.
Good night, Zack.
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noahops Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2011
*Cry*
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KiaraHana Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2010   Digital Artist
Sent shivers down my spine, uh...

Zack's more fun than Cloud. Pity he died then.
Honestly, Zack and Cloud are both so cute...I mean, like, adorable. (Although they're also very handsome) When they look sad...it breaks my heart. I abso-freaking-lutely love they!
Damn, It's sad that he died, because of puny gunfire in the ending of Crisis Core... (But, I guess everybody would eventually get tired even with super human strength after fighting a million soldiers all at once.)

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And... when Zack died...*sob* I... I'm, uh *cry*..... I'm so alone, so lost, so regretful and remorseful, and truly, deeply sad and distressed. I cry so-so hard.



Zack Fair isn't a hero... He's a LEGEND!
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HufflePuffHottie95 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2010
iiii want to cry now... i cried at the ending..... :cries:
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yen-ta Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2009
RIP Zack the puppy, good poetry
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tanksmallcape Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
that was beautiful. The ending of crisis core was so deep and intense.
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shade-kun Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
this is really cool. i cried when i saw my first amv where Zack dies. there are some really good amv's and this is a really good poem.
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IningBatong Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009
*cries then puts flowers near Zack's sword* you will be missed Zack!
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darkfallenangeled Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Student General Artist
>.< poor Zack
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Atoli11 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2008  Student General Artist
T_T That poem is beauitfully written. I act cold hearted but seeing a sence like that at the end of Crisis Core made me cry like a baby.
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SubakunoGaara Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Student Interface Designer
So am I.
But FFCC is worth crying.^^
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Atoli11 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2008  Student General Artist
meh I restarted and his up to lv 50 with Regan and wall metaria and 9999HP
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chaos-of-vinnie Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
you should definatly play the game its sure to make you cry T.T
i really liked you're poem though brought a tear to my eye its like you captured the last moment of zacks life before he died .nicely written
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SubakunoGaara Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2008  Student Interface Designer
thanks.
I'm a little bit flattered, because everyone seems to like it and tell me how it fits the moment, even though I never played the game, so I don't know a lot about it. It's just youtube AMV's, nothing more...
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AkiyamaEXE Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008
I bawled the first time I played it and now every scene makes me cry! I've played through the end about 5 times and I still cry. Great poem, tis so sad
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SubakunoGaara Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2008  Student Interface Designer
Thanks a lot! I really appreciate it :)
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katt315 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
...D: So sad D;...but beautifally written :D
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GeminiGiltenkreuz Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think soon I'll cry too... playing Crisis Core... as my eyes were filled with tears when I saw Zack and Aerith going on a date...
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YukinoHoshi Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
I bawled my eyes out. I'm such an emotional fop.

He died after fighting thousands of Shinra Troops, trying to prevent he and Cloud being taken back to the Lab. Three soldiers and a helicopter were all that remained, with Zack too tired to even attack normally. Eyesight slowly fading, he stumbles backwards as the last of the troops fill him with a round's worth of lead. -sniff- As I said, I bawled my eyes out, especially hearing what he said to Cloud.
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Rokubijinchuuriki Featured By Owner May 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Das ist wunderschön...
*sniff*
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AnimeFaerieDrawer Featured By Owner May 18, 2008
I have to admit I cried a little too when I saw the videos D:
And sorry I haven't been able to talk to you in a while >:
I'll try and be on tonight, I promise.
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